Today, I am proud to announce the winners of the Carrot Ranch’s 2020 Writing Rodeo Event #3 which I had the honor of organizing. Ten brave cowpokes saddled up, rustled up six words from the song “Git Along Little Dogies,” and lassoed them little dogies into a unique 99-word story in the genre of their choice.
The judges struggled to pick one over another story they were so doggoned good and so different. Surprise endings, funny, murderous, you would be entertained. Each and every one of the contestants should feel proud. They flexed their writing muscles into fingers of steel.
Everyone who participated is welcomed to display this badge on their website. You earned it!
Now, for our Writing Rodeo 2020 honorable mentions:
“McCall” written by Bill Engleson
“Just a Numbers Game” written by Liz Husebye Hartmann
“Walking the Canal Path” written by Susan Spitulnik
“Remarkable Ramblin’” written by Jules Paige
And the winner is:
“New Bride in Wyoming” written by Doug Jacquier
If you’d like to read these fine works, trot on over to https://carrotranch.com where Ranch Head Ms. Charli Mills is displaying and compiling the winners of all of the Writing Rodeo events.
Again, congratulations to the winners and to everyone who entered.
And thank you to the fabulous judges,
Norah Calvin and Irene Waters!
‘It was a pleasure to judge the entries in the Rodeo Competition hosted by Marsha. Each entrant had the same set of rules by which to work and what I loved was the creativity used by each entrant and each writer’s own interpretation of how best to work within these confines. The stories were varied and enjoyable to read. I worried that it would be difficult to find a winner among the wonderful array we had but two did stand out. The winning entry still has me laughing. Congratulations to each and every one of you who entered – being taken outside our comfort zone is a great way of taking your writing to the next level. Congratulations to the winner. Your story was not only funny, it was a complete story with an extremely creative use of the words. I can’t call you by name as I had to wait like everyone else to see who it is that has won.’
We live for stories, and as writers, we craft them in the written word. A story is about Something (plot) that happens to Someone (characters), Somewhere (setting). Even if it is only 99 words long.
Crafting the Story
Act I, the beginning, the story rises. If a story is about someone, we have to feel something for that character. When we care what happens next for or to this Someone, we come to the middle.
Act II shifts to fear, according to the Greeks. We can interpret this as the emotion that drives the writer and reader to worry about what happens next. Or be curious about what comes next. The driving emotion doesn’t have to be fear, but the middle holds an important shift or build-up of tension or expectation. The story is in motion.
Act III is when that motion comes to an end. The action falls; the story has arrived at an exit. A good ending is not canned, but one that lets the reader think about the story and the Someone long after the conclusion. A twist is when a writer ends with the unexpected, and it can be humorous or dramatic.
Theme Western Music “Git Along Little Doggies”
This week’s contest is based on Western Music, in particular this popular song, “Git Along Little Dogies,” first published in 1910, but mentioned as early as 1893.
General Contest Criteria
Much like with Colleen’s Found Poem Rodeo Contest last week, you are going to use the song, “Git Along Little Dogies” to inspire your writing.
Include a line of consecutive words or at least six pivotal words from throughout the lyrics in your entry. Use bold font or highlight the words to make it easier for the judges to see.
Feel free to include pictures from your research of the song that inspired you.
Write a story that has Three Acts (they do not need to be labeled).
The story must have a discernible beginning, middle, and end.
The story must be about someone, set somewhere, and something happens.
The story can be fiction or BOTS (based on a true story).
It can include any tone or mood, and be in any genre, and there is NO PROMPT.
Make the judges remember your story long after reading it.
Every entry must be 99 words, no more, no less. You can have a title outside that limit. Check your word count using the wordcounter.net. Entries that aren’t 99 words will be disqualified.
Enter this contest only once. If you enter more than once, only your first entry will count.
Do your best to submit an error-free entry. Apply English grammar and spelling according to your country of origin style. As long as the judges can understand the language, it is the originality of the story that matters most.
If you do not receive an acknowledgment by email WITHIN 3 DAYS, contact Charli at email@example.com.
Entries must be received by 11:59 p.m. EST on October 26, 2020.
Refrain from posting your contest entry until after November 24, 2020
Entries must use at least six words from the Theme Song to qualify.
Entries will be judged and a winner will be announced on November 17. The winning entries will be posted on a page at Carrot Ranch. There is a cash prize for the winning entry..
Use the form below the rules to enter.
A Little History About Git Along Little Dogies
Do you love history like I do? Many recording artists have recorded the iconic cowboy tune since 1910, “Git Along Little Dogies.” Maybe you remember Roy Rogers’ 1940 version. A link to his video at the end of the lyrics may inspire your writing.
You might want to listen to the first commercial version of the song recorded in 1928 by Harry McClintock on a Victor V – 40016 B. In fact, each of the recordings come from different eras and different voices.
The Birth of the Sons of the San Joaquin
by Marsha Ingrao
Lon Hannah loved the Lord, baseball, singing, and people. Sunday evenings after church, a group of us went to Hannah’s Triangle in Ivanhoe, CA to listen to Lon sing.
At his 80th birthday party, partygoers relaxed under the shade trees and sang cowboy songs. At about four, Lon’s sons Jack and Joe and grandson Lonnie mused, “What can we cowpunchers do to continue Gramp’s Legacy? Let’s become real cowboy singers like the Sons of the Pioneers.”
From then on, the Sons of the San Joaquin “git along” the trail performing and recording cowboy songs like Git Along Little Dogies.”
Git Along Little Dogies
Traditional Song Lyrics
As I was a-walking one morning for pleasure I spied a cowpuncher all riding along His hat was throwed back and his spurs was a-jinglin’ As he approached me, he was singin’ this song:
(Chorus:) Whoopee ti yi yo, git along little dogies It’s your misfortune and none of my own Whoopee ti yi yo, git along little dogies You know that Wyoming will be your new home
Early in the spring, we round up the dogies Mark ’em and brand ’em and bob off their tails Drive up our horses, load up the chuck-wagon Then throw the dogies out on the trail
It’s a-whoopin’ and yellin’ and a-drivin’ them dogies Oh, how I wish that you would go on It’s a-whoopin’ and punchin’ and go on little dogies You know that Wyoming will be your new home
Some boys goes up on the trail just for pleasure But that’s where they get it most awfully wrong For you haven’t an idea the trouble they give us While we go driving them all along
When the night comes, and we hold them on the bed-ground These little dogies that roll on so slow Round up the herd and cut out the strays And roll the little dogies that never rolled before
The list of YouTube recordings at the end of the lyrics is not exhaustive. Listen to all of the different artists, or find additional recordings that inspire you as you write.
Norah Colvin is a lifelong learner and passionate educator. She believes in the power of education to change lives and is committed to raising awareness of ways to support and enhance learning.
Norah has spent her life learning and thinking about how children learn and how best to support their learning. Her own observations as learner, parent and teacher have enhanced understandings developed in both formal and informal study situations.
She believes strongly in the need for learning to be self-initiated, directed and motivated, and the importance of timely and appropriate support for learners on their individual journeys.
While no longer working with children in a school setting, Norah continues to share her passion for education and love of children’s literature through writing.
Irene began her working career as a reluctant potato peeler while waiting to train as a student nurse. On completion she worked mainly in intensive care/coronary care; finishing her hospital career as a clinical nurse educator in intensive care.
A life-changing period as a resort owner/manager on the island of Tanna in Vanuatu was followed by recovery time as a farmer at Bucca Wauka. Having discovered she was no farmer she took on the Barrington General Store and running a five-star restaurant.
After retiring and renovating their house, she and her husband moved to Queensland where she completed a post-grad certificate in Creative Industries in 2013. She followed this with a Master of Arts by research graduating in 2017. Now she lives to write and writes to live.
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