Writer’s quote Wednesdays Writing Challenge

This Week’s Topic – LIGHT or LIGHTS

I am inspired by Terri Webster Schrandt’s Sunday Stills Photo Challenge topics for December 13th. – Light or lights

Instructions

  1. Pick a quote to match the week’s topic.
  2. Write a response on your blog with a title that suits your post.
  3. Cut and paste the #WQWWC logo if you want to use it.
  4. Use the #WQWWC hashtag to get more views.
  5. Paste a link to your post on my weekly post in Mr. Linky.
  6. Or past a link in my comment section. I will visit your blog and comment.
  7. Visit other bloggers who have participated and leave them an encouraging comment.

Brokenness Invites Light

A rocky stairway in Kings Canyon National Park took my breath away as my friend Monica and I hummed a “Stairway to Heaven.” The pieces of broken rock let in the light and lead us to a lookout where we marveled at the valley floor. If the rock hadn’t broken, the light would be obliterated.

Rocky path
Shimmering with light
Leads upward

Like the broken rocks glowing in the sunlight, Snickerdoodle, a three-week-old orphan my husband found in our yard, broken, full of fleas, eyes matted shut, dehydrated, and barely able to walk was broken. Even a bottle and some antibiotics were not enough to cure this little kitten. The vet had no appointment available for two weeks, but I took him in wrapped in a towel at the very end of the day. 

Broken they took him
No appointment required
Without help he dies.

His broken body moved the receptionist and doctor. Dr. Haggard gave him an IV of fluid, and more antibiotics, and told us he might not make it. My heart was light because at least the little guy had a chance.

Rubbed his tiny head
Whispered love into his ears
Vowed to keep him safe

Snickers brought light into our lives as we fed him every three or four hours and watched him get stronger. We think his ordeal blinded him, but it did not stop him from running to see us at feeding time.

Nestled against me
Fluid forced through his clenched teeth
He learned to suckle

Even though he had cuddled his way into our hearts, after Snickers healed, my husband found him a new home with two teenage girls who had lost their mother. We hope that he brought more light into their home as well. 

Like the stairs carved from the mountain, broken lives bless us and allow the light within us to shine as we care for someone or something beyond ourselves. 

Don’t forget to visit other writers who participate in #WQWWC.

20 responses to “#WQWWC #1: Brokenness Invites Light”

  1. […] Last week I combined a Haibun, personal story, and a photo. For this challenge, I’m attempting a short story. I tried to cram it into 99 words Carrot Ranch – style, but it wouldn’t shrink. […]

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  2. I joined in this week. I hope all is okay. I love discussing quotes so always happy to do that. Great challenge. Thank you. Here is my entry. https://forestwoodfolkart.wordpress.com/2020/10/13/has-the-world-gone-entirely-crazy/

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    1. Funniest post I’ve read in a very long time, sadly. Forestwood shares her day’s tragedies. 🙂

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      1. The quote helped me see the value and hunour in non- optimal circumstances.

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        1. Funniest post EVER! You got it!

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  3. Hmm. Very intriguing Marsha. I will have to look into this further. Though I shy away from too many bloggy challenges, this one has piqued my curiosity. My muse Lapham’s Quarterly is loaded with quote sidebars. To be determined… 😉

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    1. With your sense of humor, you’re a shoe in. 🙂 I get that nobody can do too many challenges. It gets taxing. And it’s super hard to do them every week, especially as good as you are about reading other people’s blogs. 🙂 I just wanted you to feel welcome and invited. 🙂

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      1. Thank you. Very kind of you.

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      2. It won’t let me subscribe. I’ve entered two different emails, click follow, and get: Your subscription did not succeed, please try again with a valid email address. Your blog does not show in my followed blog list either.

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        1. Glad you got it all sorted, John. I read from the top down, most recent comments first. 🙂

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      3. I’m subscribed now and it’s appearing in my Reader. I had to click on the additional ‘shadow’ message that appeared lower right, after following. Good thing we are computerized.

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        1. Thank you so much, John. Glad to have you on board. I think I’ve followed you, but I had better check. 🙂

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  4. Darn. I’m unable to read your post. Never happened before.

    Monica Pizura innkeeper@wickyup.com

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    1. That is weird. It’s probably the internet. Sometimes ours is just not on at all. You wait a while and it’s back. 🙂

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  5. It’s a good thing we’re all a little bit broken. Love this quote.

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    1. I am soooooo happy to be broken, Norah! LOL BTW congrats on all your awards and honorable mentions on the Rodeo Contest. We met this week. Charli was so please with what everyone did, and asked us to host next year. I am happy to, especially if you and Irene judge for me again. You made great decisions and were so close in your thinking. The discussions were deep – things I wouldn’t have considered. Have a wonderful week. Let’s chat soon.

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      1. Thanks so much, Marsha. It was a pleasure to work with you and Irene. Let’s see what next year brings. 🙂

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        1. You are so busy, and yet you are such a good friend to so many of us. I don’t know how you do it!

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          1. That’s kind of you to say so, Marsha. I never feel I do enough for anyone.

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